练习6
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about Changes in People’s Diet according to the following outline in three paragraphs. Your part of the composition should be no less than 100 words, not including the words given. Remember to write clearly.
Changes in People’s Diet　　1. state the changes in people’s diet in the past five years
　　2. give possible reasons for the changes
　　3. draw your own conclusion
　　4. You should quote as few figures as possible.

正确答案：
【参考范文】
As is seen from the table, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years from 2001 to 2005. Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, its consumption is decreasing year by year, while the proportion of some high-energy food, such as milk, meat has increased steadily.
What have caused these changes? I think there are two main reasons. First, people now have enough money to afford more expensive food with better nutrition. Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet. They are seeking the quality of food which will do good to their health.
In short, people’s living standard has been rising remarkably in recent years, and we can expect we will have a more prosperous future.
【范文点评】
写作本文的关键是要看懂图表中的数字变化,并能够从数字变化中总结出一些规律。这篇作文很好地完成了图表作文试题规定的任务,包含了所有的内容要点。考生把文章分成三段:文章的开头,考生开门见山,直接从图表入手,描述了近5年人们饮食结构的变化;第二段阐述了引起这种变化的两点原因,条理清晰,层次分明,逻辑性强。第三段用表示总结的连接词In short,把changes意义进一步引申,之后展望未来。结尾干净利落。

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