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The Olympic Games Shouldn’t Be Abolished There are different voices about whether the modern Olympic Games should be abolished. As the article covered on The Guardian,the modern Olympic Games are highly commercialized, prohibitively costly, and void of social benefits. So these people think that this global event should better be cancelled. On the other hand, the Olympic Games advocate world peace, friendship and hope, media like TIME believes that it is of great significance to hold Olympic Games. As a huge sports fan, I am strongly against the idea of abolishing this global sports gala.
The movement should have its own place in the international community mainly for three reasons. Firstly, the Olympic Games provide an international arena for players from all over the world to compete with each other, show human talents and challenge physical limit. Through participating in the Olympic Games, people break more and more records. It is someone’s dream to win an Olympic medal after years of training and whenever we meet problems, we will draw upon the spirit of “faster, higher and stronger”. Besides, the Games can also promote mutual communication between different countries. Thirdly, the influx of foreign visitors would greatly facilitate the development of the economy in the host city and in order to make the full use of Olympic facilities, we are building more practical facilities.
In conclusion, we humanity would suffer a great loss if modern Olympic Games be abolished. As for some fixable issues, such as resources wasting, we are figuring out ways to deal with that with the help of modern technology. It is unwise to throw the baby out with the bath water. The Olympic Games are a vital platform for us to excel ourselves and forge abounds cross national borders.
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【审题构思】
本篇文章就是否应该取消奥运会展开讨论,文章共涉及四家媒体的看法,其中前一则报道认为应该取消奥运会,最后一则报道则认可奥运会的存在价值。根据题目的要求,考生可采取以下的布局:
第一段:总结新闻报道涉及的主要观点,并说明理由,如取消奥运会主要是考虑到奥运变得越来越商业化,且成本高、社会效益低等,而支持奥运会则是认为奥运给人带来希望,有助于世界和平;提出个人见解,即奥运会不应被取消。
第二段:指出奥运会两个重要贡献。其一,奥运会是重要平台,展示人类无尽的才能与潜力;其二,奥运会能够促进各过交流;第三,奥运会能在一定程度上促进主办国经济发展。
第三段:总结全文,奥运会在当今世界仍然有着重要的作用。